Catch in those eyes

Those gorgeous eyes i felt for no reason until i found it out what it actually means to me. Tell me what you think of my Poem. Enjoy reading!

Standing in front of you and looking deep in your eyes.

Makes me not feel the ground.

I get lost in your eyes.

And speechless i get.

I just want to lay down and keep staring in your eyes.

It's not only about the beauty of it.

But it's about the Care,

About the Love.

Everything i need i see in those gorgeous eyes.

I remember that sins the first time i saw you 

I got lost in your eyes for no reason.

Until i found out what those gorgeous eyes actually means to me.

Author's Note

Ignore the grammar problem.

Reviews

[Mrs Meggins]

What do the eyes represent? For some reason I think it is more than just plain sight but love and love is deep. Love can be at first sight but also needs to pass the test of time. Nurture your poem as it relates to these eyes but do not lose sight that life is a long journey. It is nice to be in love, but remember to keep it fresh throughout the journey.

[Irfan bin Yusuf Qadri]

..very nicely written...!

[zainul]

Love the splendid work.
You have depicted great feelings.

[Gail]

Thank You very much :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome :)

[Bri]

Beautifully lovable. I like how you've taken the concept of attraction and given it your own spin and made it your own. Nice.

[Gail]

Thank you very much :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Absolutely a master piece, great approach of the subject.

[Gail]

Thank you so much!! :)