Another Goodbye

Ever so random. Kinda rhymes...

We'll never know
how things were meant to go.
We could try again,
but it would never be the same.

See this heart that's torn in two
and it's all because of you.
I gave it all,
But you never could stay true.

With tears in these eyes
it's time I said goodbye.
So please don't ask me
If we can still be friends.

Author's Note

Not my best, but I'd still like to know what you think.

Reviews

[Vitcky Walker]

goodbye always the pain at the beginning. nice job

[Theresa]

I love this. It's raw, honest and emotional. I think we all have been in this place at one time or another and for lack of a better word it sucks. You give your all and in the end you feel it was for nothing. Then he throws the we can still be friends line at you. It hurts but I do have to say I am still friends with a few guys that broke my heart and sometimes a friendship is better than nothing but sometimes it takes a while to get to that place. A great piece brought me down memory lane. Nicely done.

[Susan14]

i love it, this is so good and its really amazing, This is a poem that i can actually relate to and maybe others can to. sometimes you love this person so much, it's impossible for you to even think of just being friends with that person because you want to be so much morei liked how you emphasized certain words by placing them in italics, it really brings out their meaning. Wonderful job the way you displayed the emotions here. great write.

[Daydreamer54]

Well all i can say is thet this expesses break-ups. Sometimes u love someone so much, it's impossible 4 u to even think of jusr being friends with that peraon. having to watch them and their new love, it's kinda akward. Anyway great write!

[Momo the Elf]

great job, again. i like how you emphasized the certain words by placing them in italics. it made me stop and think for a second, too, though I've never really expierenced that kind of situation XD wonderful job conveying the emotions here, too ^^ write more asap~!

[MiidniightSoul]

It was a very good and beautiful poem. Keep up the good wrok ^^