Thoughts

Thoughts

A Poem by Lucia
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A Haiku. Short, sweat, and to the point!

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Thoughts

Here they are again
The thoughts that flow through my pen
My silent, strong friends

© 2009 Lucia


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Lucia
To short to review.

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short and sweet. Oh the wonderful power of haikus. -smile- You really got the essence of your meaning in only 17 syllables. That's not easy to do, my friend. Very nice.
I really love the last line. Thoughts really are the writer's (or anyone for that matter) friends. Where would be without thoughts?
I also really liked how you pointed out that the pen is often the catalyst for creativity. Just flows from the mind through the pen and onto paper. Very nice again. Keep up the good work! Fighting!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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short and sweet. Oh the wonderful power of haikus. -smile- You really got the essence of your meaning in only 17 syllables. That's not easy to do, my friend. Very nice.
I really love the last line. Thoughts really are the writer's (or anyone for that matter) friends. Where would be without thoughts?
I also really liked how you pointed out that the pen is often the catalyst for creativity. Just flows from the mind through the pen and onto paper. Very nice again. Keep up the good work! Fighting!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's short but sweet and sometimes those are what make the best poems. I really enjoyed this. Nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

no it is not too short to review! i like it, and as writers we all know the feeling of having so many jumbled thoughts in our brains that we have to let them out somehow~ great write! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 19, 2009

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Lucia
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Candyland, OH



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Hello, Lucia here! I'm a girl, sixteen years old, and an (almost Junior) in high school. I am also the youngest in my family... ... Many things I enjoy are writing (obviously), reading, listening .. more..

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