Heart, Mind, Soul

Inspire by a short story I just recently wrote. I'll post the story later :)

To be loving

now I'll start

To try to reach

your briliant heart

 

To be loving

to be kind

Only for you

I do not mind

 

To be loving

to be whole

Becoming one

with your soul

Author's Note

Written like a true 4th grader! lol (I'm really a Sophomore)

Reviews

[Susan14]

wow!!!! this is so amazingg!!!! and even though the poem is short, it doesn't matter because the resounding themes and tone of this poem shine through brillantly, and the last two lines are so powerful, i love it

[Momo the Elf]

wow!!! and even if you think this one is a little short, it doesnt matter because the resounding themes and tone of this poem shines through brillantly. the last two lines are so powerful... love it~!!!