A Hidden Heart

A Hidden Heart

A Poem by Lucia
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Short variation of a poem I have already written. Doesn't rhyme at the end, awkward...I know.

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There is a heart that must be free to fly

That burns with a need to know the reason why.

Why must we always conceal....

.....what we think and how we feel?

 

Must there be a secret me?

Why am I forced to hide?

© 2009 Lucia


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Lucia
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yay! short version? you should put up the longer version!!! but ah the message in this poem is so deep, and i can completely relate to it. don't worry if it doesn't rhyme at the end, actually it gives it a nice affect. ^^

Posted 15 Years Ago


i liked it, and the non-rhyming at the end was fine in my opinion

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on October 19, 2009

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Lucia
Lucia

Candyland, OH



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Hello, Lucia here! I'm a girl, sixteen years old, and an (almost Junior) in high school. I am also the youngest in my family... ... Many things I enjoy are writing (obviously), reading, listening .. more..

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