My Blue, Black Shoes

My Blue, Black Shoes

A Poem by LovelyDeath
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A poem about my shoes, I was staring down at my feet during a test and I just wrote this on my hand.

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Black like the night
But with every night there is another day
 Blue like the sky
  But with every day there shall be a night
 There are hardly any fairy tales
 Especially not in my blue, black shoes

© 2010 LovelyDeath


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I like how you were able to just look at your shoes and *poof* you thought of a poem for it. That was creative ;] Short and simple, nice piece :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh wow.. Short, but great.

Posted 14 Years Ago


So short and expresses so much..your poem tells us..one doesn't need too many words to express one self..

Posted 14 Years Ago



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LovelyDeath
LovelyDeath

AVC, CA



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My name is Miranda, I'm 12 years old and I've been writing for only about a year, but I've read more than 2thousand books since I've learned to read and over 95thousand pages. I love romance novel.. more..

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