Night Terrors

A day dream that gets tainted by reality.

I thrive at night, my mind sees clearly my soul never reeling....
But in the night I can see terrors light shining red and blue, are they coming for me ? Or you?
All I want is to walk freely in a kingdom that refuses to see me.
I often fantasize about a peaceful forever
While I rock back and forth surrounded by these
Night Terrors.

Author's Note

Honesty is all I need.....and some constructive criticism of course

Reviews

[Casey Lou]

I like this piece :)
It certainly paints a picture for me, and I love the simple ending. There are some grammatical errors in there but they are easily fixed. Well done!

[Lovelorn]

oh man...that's embarrassing. But thank you so much that means so much to me! I'll be sure to keep a look out for errors like that in the future :)

[Casey Lou]

Not at all, I've made mistakes in my writing that others have corrected me on. :) Keep at it, your poem is lovely!