Letting Go

Letting go might sound easy but it is not.

I have finally decided to let you go

Wishing it was a brilliant option

Although my tears will always flow

I just need to make the last conclusion

 

Here in my heart you will still reside

The greatest moments of the two of us

All the impossibilities that I have tried

I will directly return it to where it was

 

Me: “I love you”

You: “I love her”

 

It was hurtful when you answered me

But then I thought of just accepting it

The painful scars that you might not see

It made me down from my head to feet

 

Me: “Goodbye”

You: “Thank you”

 

Letting you go is easy for me but…

Forgetting you will take a long time…

Author's Note

I am letting you go just to make you happy. I know that you don't need me in your life anymore but just to let you know, I felt hurt.

Readers, bear with me, I am awfully melancholic right now.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Last lines are fact. When the door of love is closed. Heart began to know pain. I like the story and the strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Chris]

Don't apologize for being YOU... only do that when you aren't - you.

Melancholy is a reality many share in their own way and time.

The poem:
I listened to the head speak, and heard the heart leak.

Take care,
Chris

[Thea]

Aw...That's really sad...Letting go of someone is really not that easy especially when you love that person too much! I can feel the emotions in this piece...
Great work! Keep it up!
:)))

[Leon R]

This awesome piece yo have here. It's somehow sad that such bad feelings made you write something so brilliant. It hurts, I know.
I just hope next time you write something brilliant it will be provoked by better feelings.
*hugs you*

[stars are far]

This was so nice ..
and really walking away needs time but forgetting is never easy
great work :)

[Ruth]

Such lament is never easy to forget, letting go is a necessity and when we do we still have to suffer the pangs of sorrow and frustration!
Beautifully delivered love xoxo

[Desmund Tiny]

me: I love you, you: I love her

I love this part because I can relate to the situation shown in this poem.
Letting go of someone means setting you self free but it takes time to ease the pain... I love this poem!!! ^^,


~Des~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific piece of melancholic poetry...
filled with deep impactful emotions...
love the 3 diff formats...all add to it...
and how true is the last couplet...
Awesome work :)