Heartbreak

Missing the past, everything in it.

I still remember the times we’ve spent

The magnificent memories of the past

Holding the promises that we’ve said

But now it’s enclosed by countless tears

 

Is it possible to return those we had?

Could it be better or just worse?

Am I girl that was horribly bad?

Just let me shout all my remorse

 

I miss your kiss, your hug, your smile

Loving you forever is a MUST to me

I’ve been thinking ‘bout you for awhile

This is ME loving you truthfully

 

Please, come back. . .I love you. . .

SO MUCH. . . 

Author's Note

I know this poem is horrible, as what I said in my profile, I am not that good at writing down things so please, do not be harsh. It is just I remembered him again. I want to see him once more even for the last time.

Reviews

[stars are far]

This was so sweeet ..it is not horible ..
and you must know that it is not important for you to be professional at writing cause poems is expressing feelings not being perfect in writing ..
so keep expressing you feeling and then you will be perfect .. trust me :)
and by the way i miss him too :(

[EYES OF MY SOUL]

A person can mispell a word ,a person can come off inapropriate but writing is a language so you keep on expressing yourself because there i promise you ,you can never go wrong..

[Kuhr Gred]

GREAT WRITE! i feel the emotions.. you're the type of writer.. illustrate with freedom :).. In any relationship there are always trials.. so don't give up ;)

[Anonymous Me]

i think i get this more. i'm sorry you're in so much pain. I'd tell you i understand, but i hate when people say that to me, so i won't.

[Distant horizons]

Anything so heartfelt can never be horrible. you expressed beautifully emotions that most people hide and repress. I know which way sounds healthier to me.

[Kim's Poems]

This is so sweet and kind of passionate too. I like this,
You tugged my heart with this write. Awesome!!!

[Leslie Philibert]

Wow ! A real passionate poem - and I believe every word. You wrote it because you
felt that way ...that makes it honest and classy. Well done.

[paparapapa]

The poem's simple and straightforward while the emotions it poured are honest and raw. Continue writing and you'll definitely improve. Oh, and I love how you ended this. Speaks a lot. Great job. :)

[Desmund Tiny]

it is not horrible...it really nice and this one is my favorite today.... ^^,

[Raven Starhawk]

Love lost is a love that shatters a heart. I know from experience. It has a power that changes your life. I do not think this is a horrible poem. In my opinion and it is just my opinion it is a excellent expression of pain, heartache and longing.