Moment

I gazed at the stars outside
As you whispered my name in the moonlight.
It was a moment so right.
I didn't want to doze off.

I felt my breath slow.
As it became the same as yours.
In this moment,
The world seemed to stop.

Just then,
I kissed your lips softly and
Slowly let my eyes close.

This moment so right,
As the stars glowed
I whispered goodnight.

Falling deep into your warmth and embrace.
The moment,
Nothing but perfect.

Reviews

[Emberlorna]

Beautiful work, I love the images you convey. So romantic and sweet. Truly a lovely write :)

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

Thank you, this means a lot! Really put a smile on my face :)

[Emberlorna]

:)

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

You're too kind! :) Haha.