Yes, I cut.

poem

 Yes, I cut and as I bleed,

the world just seems easier to me.

Rumors,Lies, and Words so hurtful,

What makes someone truely worthful?

Yes I cut, and as I bleed,

The world just seems easier to me.

                     

Sad days and lonely nights,

 All the times we had our fights.

The words you said to me all were true,

I guess the truth is I still love you.

 

Yes, I cut and as I bleed,

The world just seems easier to me.

 

Reviews

[Matthews Reggie]

Small but perfect, a sad poem... The repeating line 'Yes,I cut and as I bleed and 'the world just seems easier to me' were powerful, creative and emotional... But the only defect I can point out is that minus the repeat lines, the poem is only 8 lines and very few ideas.... But ignore it, this poem is a work of excellence... Work of creativity... Keep it up...

[eighwoeifj]

I guess this is one way to look at cutting... Mostly a stereotypical way. I know for a fact that you're not a cutter (mostly because I know you in real life and I've known people who were legitimate cutters). But, it's a nice poem nonetheless.

[SenoritaAriii<3]

actually, if it helps, i do understand. ive already been down that road, and i hope it gets better for you. you can stop, i knowit, you juss havta b confident in yuhrself. nd yah, were nawt relly frends or n e thing, so sorry if it feels like im a creeper or something. i juss get this nd am tryign to help.(:

[Kirbetsy]

I agree with Shayna. Don't let the razor talk to your wrist, talk to someone. I'm here if you ever wanna talk. You can call me and I'll answer unless my phone's taken away. But I also understand what Ari is saying. We aren't you and we can never really understand. But still if you ever need to talk I'm here

[SenoritaAriii<3]

so, i totally agree that you shouldnt hurt yourself, but the choice is yours, no matter how bad it is. it would be grate if you could talk to somebody other than a razor, nd we all really wish you would, but we arnt you, so we cant relly make you safe.:( nd, even though its bad advice, i still say if you really feel the need to hurt someone, have it be amanda, not yourself. get better(:

[Gianna Perry]

here's a question: someday when you grow up, do you want to have to wear long sleeve shirts all the time to cover up scars from cutting? what about when you have kids and they ask why mommy has scars on her arms? or at a job interview? you're hurting yourself so much by doing this. please, please, PLEASE, stop this. talk to someone instead of hurting yourself. hell, talk to mcbride or something! he's a cool dude. he'd listen and help you. or a womanly teacher. or your mom. sister. aunt. grandma? i don't know. talk to me. don't let the razor talk to your wrists.

[Kirbetsy]

Jaycie please stop. I don't wanna see you get seriously hurt. I like Ari's idea, hurt amanda!! Don't hurt yourself because of what some b***h did to you. Hurt her if you have to hurt someone...that was bad advice. Don't hurt anyone, yourself included. Please stop

[Gianna Perry]

jaycie you dont really do you...? that's not cool man. you could seriously hurt yourself cutting yourself. please don't. this isn't a review as a writer. it's as a friend that doesn't want to see you getting messed up.

[SenoritaAriii<3]

stop ittttt!!!! hrut somebody else, like say, amanda?(:

[JaceJordd]

Hhahahah VV that just made me happy(: and yeah i still do it): its like addicting for me.