When I See You(:

When I See You(:

A Poem by JaceJordd
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I really don't think this is a poem but I wrote it when I was trying to tell someone that I liked them. Hope you like it.

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When I see you I get butterflies in my stomach. My heart races faster, and I make a complete fool out of myself. You've been on my mind for awhile and it's been long enough for me to know that I like you. Everyday I have wanted to tell you and I don't think I can.
It may not be because I'm scared. Even if I say it's not it is a lie. I am scared. Scared of rejection, scared of being laughed at, and scared of getting my hopes up to have them be dropped and broken to pieces.
I'm scared that you will not like me for me. You won't like me because I'm not like everyone else. I'm scared of being hurt. Everytime this happens, I'm scared of the same things over and over again. I may not be the prettiest or the skinniest but I'm me. I laugh, cry, smile, and hide myself away from everyone else in the world sometimes.
If you ever read this you will know how I feel finally if I don't tell you before. If I tell you after then I hope you see why I was scared, and that I finally found the strength to tell you that yes, I like you. <3

© 2010 JaceJordd


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Your right, it really isn't a poem haha:) But I still love this! It sounds like a really heartfelt and there's a LOT of emotion to it! I hope the guy you wrote this to said yes, you deserve it if this is how you feel!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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JaceJordd
JaceJordd

North Attleboro, MA



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