Burns

Hell's fire leaves burns

What is the price

Of walking through hell?

Burns leave scars

And make you remember every time you fell

You can't see ahead 

The road seems eternal

These Ideas work into my head

So I cant jump over these hurdles

I can't describe the experience

The pain makes me delirious

And I try to fight

Against hell's might

But burns leave scars!

And remind how far you are

From the goal to keep living, to get through the hate

And life doesn't seem to stop creating

more!

So I collapse on the floor

God knows what more life has in store!

I'm sorry to those

Who wished I had rose

But I can't, I am done

MY LIFE HAS COME TO A CLOSE!

I love all my friends and family

I am sorry to those who love me

But I'm done dealing with this pain

Tried from fighting with nothing to gain

Please, PLEASE, no tears for me

I couldn't stand to be a source of misery

Believe me, I'm in a better place, no longer a disgrace

My heart... Finally at a steady pace

Reviews

[Kaity Fisher]

Touching.
Incredible.
Flawless.

Just... You have so much potential as a human. You can write well. You know how to cope (Though burns/cuts/suicide is not the answer) you can write. Use this as your ventilation system. Let it all out through your poems like I do. Believe me, it helps!

I admire your work, and your potential. You truly have a talent in this, so please never stop writing!

Lastly, I am here for you. I know you don't know me but you can get to know me. Send me a message, add me as a friend. I don't care. but you shouldn't be suffering alone. And I am willing to help you!

[Muse]

when you become older....wiser...you will view these scars as victory scars...I promise u that. "we all have them."