My Angel
A Poem by Love_Time
About the one whom thats your heart! <3
My Angel
My Angel,
My Savior.
My Life,
My Love.
The only one who keeps me holdin’ on.
Keeps me hangin’ on to,
This lie of a life I live.
The one to whom,
My heart I give to.
Without her,
I am nothing.
A heart with no beat.
A heart with no spring.
Wispy blond hair,
Green brown eyes.
The one in which,
my love and trust goes to.
My Angel,
My Savior.
My Life,
My Love.
© 2010 Love_Time
Reviews
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this is sarah and i love this poem keep it up i want to see more 100/100!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
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I really liked this poem! It was sweet and beautiful! It was very heart felt! Lovely poem! :D
Posted 14 Years Ago
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this is a really good start. Its a bit choppy in some spots but its a wonderful poem.
keep it up
Posted 14 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This is a really great inspiring poem just like Joy said 100/100! Keep going, you seem like a really good writer in progress.. ;)
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This is very good! =) I love how you started and ended with the same pieces! 100/100
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 16, 2010
Last Updated on April 16, 2010
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