A Deep Mark

This is what family means to me.

A Deep Mark

Security, love

A true gift from above

Comfort, support

Something you can never sell short

Joy, laughter

A bothersome brother to chase after

Hardships, pain

Sometimes we lose, sometimes we gain

Near, far

It doesn’t matter where we are

Acceptance, care

Sometimes a thought, sometimes a prayer

White, brown

We’re still the same all around

Together, divorced

Love should never be forced

A meow, a bark

In my heart - a deep mark

Smiling faces, hugs that are free

That is what family means to me

Reviews

[Stephen]

Sounds very interesting! I`m glad to read this poem. It's very memorable ..like you captured the few moments (happiest moments) of your life in the few lyrical words. Lovely poem! I'd look forward reading your stuffs!

[Leigh]

Hugs that are free, lovely sentiments, great and meaningful feelings come through

[Wórdsmíth]

That's nice, yeah it is. sweetness's come down through your this writin'.
very lovely write.

[trainwreck]

This was really sweet. A genuine poem about family is something to be cherished.

[CreativeStroke]

Ahh a beautiful description of what family means. I fully agree with everything in this piece. Family is a very big priority to me and my family and I have always been close (and forever will be) You did a wonderful job with this poem!
I also loved the flow this piece had, easy to read :)

[Love Well Spent]

Thank you for your kind words! :)

[Inda]

Wow, one word comes to mind: sublime. Its almost musical,
Very sweet too. Great job!

[Love Well Spent]

Thank you!! :)

[Victorious]

Dear Love Well Spent,

I don't hear too much about this subject. I find it positive and sweet. Family to me never stops growing through the bounds of blood, but through brotherhood and love all over. It is a deep mark because things like support and love do make an important impact in one's life. I absolutely love this title. The rhythm points out the beauty of such bonds. Everything good comes from God and is a gift. I love how cherished it is in this piece.

Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely Victorious

God bless

[Love Well Spent]

Thank you so much! :)

[N!LoC]

haha i recently wrote something similar about what "family" means to me.. but not a poem... just a blog post... i actually dont have any idea how to answer a simple question of "what does the word FAMILY mean to you?"

[quinfinn]

family, camaraderie, brotherhood, love....these are the best things in life. i love the gentle and analytic way you chose to examine this phenom. a very passionate and loving analogy. well done.

[Love Well Spent]

Thank you! :)