Like this a lot. To anyone self doubt is defiantly a demon. As for writers block, I can say I've subscribed to so agony at times. It made me think of how I then do stream of consciousness pieces in order to break out of the rut. Which if you did just pull this from your noggin on the fly to write, you did the same. Best cure I know of. Like the wording, the rhymes seem a bit forced sometimes, which skews the rhythm slightly also. I think as an overall this is a brilliant piece.
Somewhere in my Book of Shadows I have a few pieces like this to the demons I have faced and how to be rid of them.
I totally agree with Roman, this is so relatable among writers and certainly identifiable as a demon. I love the confidence that there are positive things to come at the end, and the smile that comes before the last line.
This reminds me a lot of Coleridge in his emphatic cry that inspiration strikes quickly and unexpectedly and vanishes at the most inconvenient of times.
Wow! and again wow!!!! Love it!! I have to say this is excellent!! Self-doubt is a killer, that is very true. Love the last line, "go to hell, and please never come out!" Excellent read!!
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Damn Writers Block... i hate it too. Writing is so much apart of me that when I have it I become royally depressed and become a pain in the rear. This is a wonderful Write...
Like this a lot. To anyone self doubt is defiantly a demon. As for writers block, I can say I've subscribed to so agony at times. It made me think of how I then do stream of consciousness pieces in order to break out of the rut. Which if you did just pull this from your noggin on the fly to write, you did the same. Best cure I know of. Like the wording, the rhymes seem a bit forced sometimes, which skews the rhythm slightly also. I think as an overall this is a brilliant piece.
Somewhere in my Book of Shadows I have a few pieces like this to the demons I have faced and how to be rid of them.
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