Relationships..

This is the latest poem I've written. It's about my ex Jon. I loved him..and he broke my heart so I finally got up the nerve to write about it after almost seven months of being single.. Tell me how you think it is and what needs improvement. Thanks :)

I want to crawl into my bed again

To sleep the day away

'Cause that's the only way that I know I'll be okay

I'm so sick of stupid men

 

They think I'm their toy

Built for their pleasure

Some even claim I'm their "treasure"

..He is nothing but a stupid boy..

 

I told him my feelings

How I felt about him

I thought that was the only way to win

It's amazing, the things that are so revealing

 

I'm learning to cope

As hard as it may be

I only wish that I could've made him see

That he's just a stupid dope

 

He never should've let me go

I'm better now than ever

I'm more cunning and clever

And now he'll never know

 

I'm sorry you left me Jon

And I'm sorry I hurt you...

But now is the time to move on..

Author's Note

Please, please. PLEASE review!!
It's greatly appreciated :D