Ballroom Bliss

An old-fashioned dance

Dancing, whirling

Smiling, turning

Crisp, black heels click on polished oak

Warm eyes and steady hands

Waltzing, drifting

Smooth melody from harmonious violin strings

Rainbow gowns twirl

Elegant curls bounce

Transported from ballroom to pearly skies

By a rush of sweeping sound

Viva la vida

Reviews

[M Garcia]

nicely written

[Victoria Scott]

I love how you have captured a moment so beautifully in a very unique way. I really love this poem :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

i really liked this, i love the image u give, the title is great and fitting and i love the picture as well

[Jake Erkens]

Like the imagery you paint in this lovely scene, although as a 'poem' I'm not getting it, really...I enjoyed it though! :)x

[Tasha]

I loved this, and I loved the imagery, you did a really good job.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Its...its...its...ballroom blitz...

Oh, wrong title...but still this poem rocks for sure.

[Daydreamer54]

I love the imagey in this poem and you made seem like such a happy event! Great write! ^^