When You Left

A poem about looking at the brighter side of things, even at the darkest of times.

I remember that, 

The wind blew the rain in,

When you left.

The doors slammed open,

And I saw the full moon through the storm.

The sky never looked as clear,

As it did that night.

I can't recall why we fought,

But I found solace,

In the salving sound,

Of the wind blowing in the rain,

When you left.

I'll remember that. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Serendipity Planet]

I love your imagery , soft and beautiful poem

[Breana]

Thank you!!

[emipoemi]

Again, a comment about unnecessary commas, but on the whole, this is solemn, and at the end, I dare say eerie. Well done!

[Breana]

Thank you so much I really appreciate it!

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[Correspondence]

This very nice! It seems as though this "leaving" is a sort of revelation. "The sky never looked as clear/As it did that night" and "And I saw the full moon through the storm" maybe this parting was for the better? Excellently done !

[Correspondence]

This *is very nice ! haha

[Breana]

Thank you so much. That is exactly what I was trying to convey with this poem. A bittersweet feeling. And I absolutely love the word revelation, so thank you!