Words

Cutting through the silence

Leaving scars on my wrists

Messing with my head

Breaking my heart

Killing me

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Ripping me limb from limb

Tearing me apart

Leaving me

Doubting

Bleeding

In tears

Broken

Empty

Silent

Limp

Sad

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Reviews

[Bridget Murphy]

It's a dreary poem, but it' still very good, i love it!!!:)

[Ron Jeremy]

I don't get why there is the deconstruction of verse. The images themselves are not bad, if a little cliché, but overall work decently together, yet I am still confused by the message trying to be sent. Perhaps a different form or more straight forward arrangement would have worked better.

[SwagMaster]

Sad!!!:( loved it!

Please mark this constructive and review me back!