Winter

Winter

A Poem by LoveForever

Freezing when it's winter wishing you were somewhere else
Trying to get cozy in you house
Long days of sitting around and doing
NOTHING
Wishing it was summer
Now it's spring say good bye to winter
All the long days of freezing are gone

© 2011 LoveForever


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LoveForever
This is my first poem, tell me what you think of it

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Amen to this, I like this spring weather, despite the tornadoes

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hmm, I could see this being longer. But the piece in general is good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the description of winter you give. Its definitely a nice start...can maybe be expanded a little.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 18, 2010
Last Updated on April 16, 2011


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