because ;

because ;

A Poem by Kaitlyn

 

I'm not too sure anymore, all I'm sure of is of this pain.
The feelings I have are hard to explain
Because maybe if God gave me a chance, I'd believe in him.
Because maybe if someone lit up my smile, it wouldn't be so dim.
Maybe my heart, isn't as it use to be
Maybe i'm someone else, rather than me.
I've learned so much through out the years
I've cried so much, I'm out of tears.
Forever was a lie.
because within seconds, you said goodbye.
but If love was a heart
and lovers never were to part
What would be the point of life?
To go on living, you need heart break, not an automatic Husband or wife.
Yes it's true, your first love never dies,
It's also true that you find hope in your lovers eyes
but heart break leaves a big open space,
And sometimes what you need, you didn't even know you wanted in the first place.

© 2009 Kaitlyn


Author's Note

Kaitlyn
This was written freshman year....grabbed it off my old account.

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That's beautifully sad, beautifully written .. in spite of obvious meter, you've gently put emotion and memories into your poem, that's great, Kaitlyn, really is.

Good luck with your writing ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it. It sounds almost omniscient in a mysterious kind of way.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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