Llíng gǎn (inspiration)

Llíng gǎn (inspiration)

A Story by LoveDens


Wearing it on...how could she forget him? 

Just that fragrance of sampaguita flower would always remind her that he wanted that smell to perfume her. He definitely bought a bottle of liquified aroma of that scent. Whenever she went somewhere, she could not notice that he was already following her. The fragrance must be his secret agent reporting him where she was going.

Indispensable. Not the perfume but the man who makes her felt loved like she never felt before. 

She hopes that she will feel that special feeling again. She even wants it very soon even with the possibility of feeling it with someone else. But to forget him?That is a No-no Deal.

© 2012 LoveDens


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Writing in a second language is seldom easy - especially when the second is English. I smiled at the end of this "story" - but it wasn't at you or your effort. It was because the story held a smile and you worked hard enough that I felt it.

In real - this has the flaws normally found when a writer is using a second (not native) language but your heart and effort does overcome them. With more practice you can succeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LoveDens

12 Years Ago

Thanks...yes...Ill do it better next time



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Writing in a second language is seldom easy - especially when the second is English. I smiled at the end of this "story" - but it wasn't at you or your effort. It was because the story held a smile and you worked hard enough that I felt it.

In real - this has the flaws normally found when a writer is using a second (not native) language but your heart and effort does overcome them. With more practice you can succeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LoveDens

12 Years Ago

Thanks...yes...Ill do it better next time

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LoveDens
LoveDens

Gngoog City, Region x, Philippines



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