This is Our Love Song

This is Our Love Song

A Poem by Brooke Lynn
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A love story about a guy in an immature relationship, and he secretly is super sophisticated and everyone tells the "other" girl that hes immature for liking her while he's in a relationship.

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I know you have a girlfriend,
What I didn't know before this feeling.
But now I do and it's like I have to beg
For you to stop stealing.

Stealing my heart with every look,
With every joke, laugh, touch.
Please tell me, tell me when
All of this is just too much?

Everyone tries to tell me
How I should feel about it all.
That your immature now
Wait til all the chips fall.

And what if, what if,
If they are all wrong.
What if, what if,
This is our love song?

Not the typical Romeo and Juliet,
But something more complicated.
Maybe something secretly,
Secretly sophisticated.

Maybe this is right,
Maybe this is wrong,
But if you ask me,
This is our love song.

© 2013 Brooke Lynn


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I love it!

And what if, what if,
If they are all wrong.
What if, what if,
This is our love song?

feels like a refrain to a great song :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brooke Lynn

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I think that is actually my favorite part of the whole thing. Which is why I used it as t.. read more

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Added on August 5, 2013
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Tags: love, crush, teens, relationships

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Brooke Lynn
Brooke Lynn

Killeen, TX



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A Poem by Brooke Lynn