No Time

No Time

A Poem by Love.Stained
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Maybe that's the best way to love you. Maybe that's the only way.

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No time.
Our precious seconds stolen away.
Slipping through every touch,

No time.
Let us love, 
like fireworks.
Beautiful. 
Glorious. 
Then gone.

Let us love,
like gunpowder.
Alight one moment,
Forgotten, the next.

let us live our part of the story.
Before we let ourselves give in.
Before we admit defeat.

Maybe that is the best way to love you.
Maybe it's the only way.

© 2010 Love.Stained


Author's Note

Love.Stained
Lol random poem because I 'm bored =] Hope you like it!

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Beautifully sad and sweet at the same time. I love it c:

Posted 8 Years Ago


love the random poem here.. i like the precise method in your wordage and your resolute intent in your delivery..

Posted 13 Years Ago


A hopeless relationship on it's end, A one night stand, or is it something else? I like the gun powder thing too, yet is that love? A fire within us is love but what is love if it only flashes for a moment then gone in a puff of smoke and ash? This poem could be seen in so many ways. Not just a love that is there then gone but maybe a forbidden love or a dream wished to be, or maybe even love to one who is dieing. Great poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love this bit:

Let us love,
like gunpowder.
Alight one moment,
Forgotten, the next.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love as an explosion. I like the thought.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 1, 2010
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Love.Stained
Love.Stained

Wellywood, New Zealand



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