Fire in a Snowstorm

No one chooses to come here,

for my world is a lonely snowstorm.

No one chooses to tread here,

because they're afraid of the dark.

I used to wander through the endless cold,

clueless of what I expected to find.

Until I saw a glimmer, a spark.

Hope.

And I realized you were what I was looking for.

My fire in a snowstorm.

Author's Note

My first poem xD Pleased don't be too hard on me =]

Reviews

[alison13]

And I realized you were what I was looking for.
My fire in a snowstorm.

my favorite lines.. i like it..keep up the good work.. :)

[Luke Masters]

Lovely. Well done.

[MattWheatus]

This is such a strong poem, thick imagery and clear emotion. I simply love how candid this piece is!

[Doctor JKC]

All well done; I see no flaws,
only great imagery and a
Killer-Bee last line!
Jack

[Abel Garcia]

excellent poem, and your first as well! Amazing Wording, i can also relate to it, I wish i could write as nice a poem as this it is a perfect mix of sorrow and compassion.

[Que]

I'm impressed. It's not easy to write a love poem without being a little cliche, and while yours was cliche, at least it was different in the way it was done.... if you know what I mean, wonderful. It's definately a compliment!

~Que

[Red]

My life in a nutshell. Good Job

[PoisonedFlower]

If this is your FIRST poem, then you have a natural talent! I absolutely love it! And I can really relate to it, too.

[Emily B]

this is your first poem? Seriously?!?! Your words have a sort of 'honest expression of grace'. The phrase is borrowed from a friend. But it works for you. Lovely to read your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

A outstanding poem. Your description in the poem was very good. Led the reader into conflicts. Gave us a good and hopeful ending. A pleasure to read. Hope to read more poetry.
Coyote