Failure..

This is impossible,
the humanity,the reality
Everyday something has to be impossible
Its like a replay of something horrible that you can't succeed
im thinking and thinking
failure...
th...that's what happens
sometimes days are easy
 but you just don't notice
that most are hard.
Failure,
it happens everyday
but you just don't notice...

" failure has to happen to succeed something."
     -Love Is Dead

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

Reminded me of the song "Pain" -

"This world is filled with hate,
Where happiness doesn't work.
Trust me and take my hand,
When the lights go out, you'll understand"

A dark poem indeed. More like spoken words than a poem, but good.

Keep writing.

[emily joe]

this makes me sad.

[KaySea]

vey true