The Moon Tonight

I opened the door
The bright,bright moon
caught my eye
It was like the sun but less bright
The moon looked like the shiny coin
It was so beautiful I imagined it with wolves howling
The sky was a amazing dark blue color.
It amazed me.Even the stars we as bright.
The wind blew on my face and it felt like it was the perfect night.

Reviews

[Ashley June Canfield]

I like this, the moon is gorgeous to look at.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful poem~ the wonder at the natural world is expressed with tranquil beauty~

[emily joe]

this is really good. awesome imagery.

[Dillon Cotter]

Great flow and imagery my friend. The moon is a beautiful thing to view.

-Will

[dreamer :)]

That was pretty good. try so more descriptive adjectives and it would be pulled off nicely!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I really liked this. Thanks for sharing. :)