Look Deeper

Sometimes you just have to look a little deeper
When life is to hard you have to deal with them
and go through obstacles you'll eventually find
fairness and unfairness is just part of it all
All you have to do is just live with it and don't complain.

         Just look deeper and you'll find the right answer
        




                                      '' Enjoy life while you have the time,don't waist it."
         
                                  -Love is Dead

Reviews

[Levin]

Whose the them at the very beginning? waist= waste. Sorry, its past midnight. My comprehension level is very low...but looking deeper would definitely solve a lot of personal problems and curiousities. It is good for direction when indirection and wading shallow is done. Great poem.

[Liz-z]

Aw, Looking deeper inside is probably the best way to find the write answers. And as for the quote in the end, so true... So incredibly true. I could imagine somebody dictating the whole poem and in the end whispering that last and single quote... Beautiful.! Such great talent! :)
Favorite line:
"Sometimes you just have to look a little deeper,"
The first line, and already, you're telling us that we can't give up! Amazing work! :D

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"you just have to look a little deeper
When life is to hard you have to deal with them
and go through obstacles you'll eventually find
fairness and unfairness is just part of it all"

...sorry to quote most of the poem-
but it's so poignant and philosophical-
and so very spot on true...great poem!!!

james:-)