The New Kid in School

        It is very hard to be new in a school,
   
        When no one knows you and just stare,
        it is just very hard to get new friends,
        on the very first day of the new school,


      You may not like it on the first few weeks,
      But you have to deal with it until your used to it
      just like people in real life,
       It is very hard to be new in a school,
   
      When no one knows you and just stare,
      it is just very hard to get new friends,
      on the very first day of the new school,


    

  Maybe on the second week you'll have friends that aren't mean,
  like bullies,or people who think there all that,
  if you do soon you'll notice that there just a bunch of fakes....
 

Author's Note

be honest on how you think this poem was.

Reviews

[Joshua Donahue]

it was really great. i have moved a few times in my life and being the new kid pretty much sucks! but i think you could show more emotion in the poem than you did. add some anxiety or queasiness of some sort that we all get when going to a new school. it'll make it more relateable. but still good nevertheless.