Near

 
We are near to be ending the world
I am not excited nor happy,
i am just being normal
because we are gonna pass away soon
when we are old,young,or teenager years
People might be sad people might feel bad
But me,im just fine im acting normal
I might miss being alive but the world is gonna be in good hands
once we go and  once all the animals go.

Soon another type of people or something will come and take care of the world
and we all would be in heaven or hell.                                     

Author's Note

be honest on how you thought of this poem

Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

I think you are self actualized enough to think that death is inevitable, i been on the same thinking that inspite of our effort to study to work to have a family there is death undeniably creeps through on our due time, the best thing is that we have shown to the world that we took flesh and been here, we are present, the defining importance in us is the legacy that we will leave behind... I already done my part as a person, I planted trees on our town! it is in my poem SOul within a dream, dream within a soul. Please read my poem and give some reviews, We have the same thinking about death! and that is a great feeling to know how ready we are to face death! keep it up!keep on writing! this is a great piece.

[bbb]

I think in the fourth line it should just be "pass," or possibly "passed," because it is an action verb whereas "past," is a noun. I think this is a write with the voice of a brave soul who is immune to fear and the end.

[Liz-z]

The meaning was incredible, the way you see things are fantastic. Amazing writing once again Love Is Dead! :)

[KatiePie]

I liked this, is was honest and to the point, it's spares the bull crap and that brings out a light of beauty in it, one that personally I enjoy and love. This was a fantastic write on your part, and an amazing read for me.
-Cathrine

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"People might be sad people might feel bad
But me,im just fine im acting normal
I might miss being alive but the world is gonna be in good hands
once we go and once all the animals go"

{this is an ominous poem written with such a matter of fact calm voice}

...i love this poem...

james:-)