The Perfect Day

The Perfect Day

A Poem by Love Is Dead

                                   I woke up,
                                  
                                   It was the most beautiful day today
                                  The sun felt like it was burning my eyes,
                                  The birds chirping, butterflies flying around the whole
                                   Place...just just..nature is doing its work...making the world,
                                   So beautiful...it looks much better than..than before i couldn't
                                   believe it.It was never  like this before.

                                  Today was like a day of fantasy...there was even a small breeze
                                  everywhere i went...i thought this was dream.It was like my
                                   own dream world though.I hoped it would be like this everyday
                                   to enjoy life and have fun every single minute or second.

                                   When it got darker it was still so beautiful. I laid  down there,
                                    just looking at all the shiny beautiful stars and the full moon.
                                    I got so into the beutiful sky,
                                    i didn't even sleep the whole day.I got too distracted by the
                                    nature in the sky.


 

© 2010 Love Is Dead


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I think it’s a positive outlook on any day.
Nice work


Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow!! It's utterly gorgeous!! The wording, the flow, the stanzas, everything!! Beautiful!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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