Heart

Heart

A Poem by Louise Winter

Your smile
One that shines brighter than the stars
within my night sky;
Melts my heart.

 

Your voice
As soft as a chocolate button
on a warm summer's day;
Melts my heart.

 

Your laugh
As sweet as that candy
that represents my love for you;
Melts my heart.

 

Your eyes
Mesmerizing, Gaining
my full attention;
Melts my heart.

 

Your words
Are a silver bullet
That ricochet intensely
through the channels of my mind and soul.

 

Breaks my heart.

© 2014 Louise Winter


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a thought-full flow ...describes many relationships - at their end.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Louise Winter

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
awwww This is so sweet!...
There is nothing more wonderful than to melt, to feel the beautiful intensity of heat....

A lovely write indeed!~xoxo~:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Louise Winter

10 Years Ago

And this was just a 'heat' of the moment sort of thing :) I'm so glad you like it :) x
Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

all the more intense, dear... in "the moment"...
Nicely done! X :)
Louise Winter

10 Years Ago

I was mainly inspired to write this poem as we're studying poems based around relationships in my En.. read more
This is beautifully written; I love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Louise Winter

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Louise Winter
Louise Winter

Nottingham, Nottinghamshire, United Kingdom



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I live in a world full of people pretending to be something they're not, but when I talk to you, I'm the girl I want to be I'm a 16 year old girl, and I'm in love with poetry. Want to know more.. more..

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