Word of the Lord

A poem about God

Father, son, spirit
Creator of all whom roam earth
Much more than deserved

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think

Reviews

[Josh Dollar]

Really well done. I like the simplicity.

[Louise Winter]

Thank you!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

But you really deserve an applaud!!! Amazing......compact and yet very effective!!!

[Louise Winter]

Oh my gosh! Thank you for this amazing review!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

You are welcome :-)

[BubblingMe]

Beautiful, every word

[Louise Winter]

Thank you, again, so much :)

[BubblingMe]

Your welcome! ((:

[Elina]

This is so perfectly simple. And very true. Often times it seems that the only important thing to say about our God, is that we do not deserve His grace and love.

[Louise Winter]

That is exactly the message I was hoping to give. I'm glad you like it

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

A creation by the created of the Creator. It's succinct, to the point, and an all encompassing senryu. Well done!

[Louise Winter]

Thank you so much!