If the Music Can

If the Music Can

A Poem by Louis McKraker



           Can music save your mortal soul?

                     -Don McLean



If the music can--with the simplest tune--

     Extract a man from a world of gloom;

Then assert your hand--making the darkness swoon--

     As we stand, singing melodies by light of the moon.


If music can save your mortal soul--as I believe it can--

     Then let it create a portal so--we may channel it again and again--

Let it swell and let it grow, challenging the mind and hand,

     With love and devotion--with an ability to understand.


If the music can make a strong man cry--

     And with another key, help dry your eyes--

Then may the music never die;

     But forever remain one of our greatest allies.


© 2013 Louis McKraker


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INTRODUCTION

1. The Tutor has shared with the world his love for music.

INTERPRETATION

1. I will swoon before the beautiful sound of Zeppelin.
2. I will bathe in the passion of Canned Heat.
3. I will cry in the "light of the moon" of Nightwish.

CONCLUSION

Music is immortal; it is our soul.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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INTRODUCTION

1. The Tutor has shared with the world his love for music.

INTERPRETATION

1. I will swoon before the beautiful sound of Zeppelin.
2. I will bathe in the passion of Canned Heat.
3. I will cry in the "light of the moon" of Nightwish.

CONCLUSION

Music is immortal; it is our soul.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh wow, I loved that last stanza,
This is really deep, I enjoyed this a lot : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Louis McKraker

11 Years Ago

Thank you. As always it's greatly appreciated.
A great little ode to inspire. Diligent diction and a clean honest voice. Very nicely tuned and of course very well done. Keep Writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Louis McKraker

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I will certainly keep trying.

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Tags: Lyrical, Esoteric, Rhythmic Word Art, Poetry, Musical Reference

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Louis McKraker
Louis McKraker

Montpelier, VT



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Full Name: Louis Issac McKraker Birthdate: November 9, 1984 Place of Origin: Center Point, Alabama Occupation: Poet, Fiction Writer, Journalist Styles: Post-modern, Free-verse, Esoter.. more..

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