The Scream
A Book by Loubilou
Banished from the family home, Jack spends his days doing his sisters chores and his evenings are spent in his shed with his only friend Rat. A flash in the forest sets fate in motion for Jack.
© 2016 Loubilou
Author's Note
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Hi - I am working my way through my first edit, sometimes its difficult to make time to do this whilst managing my life. I decided to publish some of my work in hope that your reviews will inspire and motivate me to work through the edit at a more regular pace.
Thank you for reading.
The Scream is a working title and I have been working on this book for around 24 months, my inspiration is from my young niece and nephew.
I have written the book to the end, and I am in the process of my first edit - to structure the story. And, whilst I am correcting some grammar as I go along, it is secondary, at this stage.
I am interested in your view of the story and whether you find it interesting.
Thank you.
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Added on July 28, 2016
Last Updated on July 31, 2016
Tags: Story, Children, Child, Fantasy, other world, banished, universe, Jack, Ellie-May, Megalynn, Ramus, Rat, Adventure, Shed, world, planet, beings
Author
LoubilouSHEFFIELD, Yorkshire, United Kingdom
About
Hi - I've been writing this story for a long time now, inspired by you nephew and niece. I would appreciate some feedback on the story. Thank you in advance. more..
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