Taking a Seat

Sitting on the wall of self-reflection

realising truths that hadn't been

fear that acknowledging their existence

forces them deeper into reality

water welcomes sparkles on its surface 

catching the sun's illuminous glow

faith flows freely among it 

till there's no-where further to go

once the sparkles dissipate into the vastness

in calm waters recognition re-appears

eyes open the greatness up above us

and see the space held between each ear

Reviews

[JE Falcon]

An easily read poem, smooth I say. And I'd have to say that the last line took me by surprise; I had to think about it for a time. :)

[Laura Kate]

Many thanks for your review, JE Falcon.

[Kerra]

I can feel a soothness in your words, this is wonderfully expressed

[Laura Kate]

Many thanks, Kerrra.