Awakening

Hands tap

    the empty drum

awakening

forbidden vibrations

   buried deep

     below dormant waters

    hidden clues 

    forgotten hues

rising to your beat

Reviews

[Gee]

I expected to read about a nun and a toy, brought secretly, from Ann Summers ! Sister Fru Strated, a German lady in her mid twenties forced into religion by an over strict father and mother, who, having only having had sex once in her life( Fru the result) decided it to be to debauched an act, and so gave over her life to God.
Was I close ?

[Laura Kate]

So close Gee!

[Paul Bell]

The thoughts maybe hidden, but not that hidden that the beat can't resurrect them lighting up senses to good times been.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts Paul.
Laura.

[Tom]

This ancient jungle drumbeat, primordial, primeval, resonates deep within the human psyche and triggers sexual awakenings ...

Mystic and marvellous brevity dear poet!

[Laura Kate]

Hi Tom,
Thank you so much for stopping by my page and for sharing your thoughts on this one - much appreciated, and nice to meet you!
Laura

[Robert Trakofler]

hey that's resonance... every drum has its own special tone range and within that range is a sweet spot where the resonance beats a refrain from yours like a pair of great acapella singers:)

[Laura Kate]

Hi Robert - thank you so much for educating me on this! That's exactly what it is :)

[Robert Trakofler]

I was kinda wondering if you were a drummer when i read this:) by extension of this I have come to sense that words have a resonance as well how you arrange them can change the tones

[Laura Kate]

Not a drummer (although I'd love to learn) but usually with a beat of some kind in mind when I write.