Key's Caress

Your hands

the making of magic.

How I long for you to care for me

the way you care for your keys,

for you to flow life to me

through your veins

the way it glides

so abundantly

to your piano.

Oh how I long for you to 

caress me,

caress me like your keys. 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A man who makes love to his piano keys. Plays his music in ecstasy. I see him well and wonder whether he would be capable of loving anything else in the same way. Great visuals here LauraKate. I am seeing a classical pianist in black coat and tails about to make sweet music, Not a woman in sight.

Chris

[Laura Kate]

Thank you so much Chris, I love what you see in this.
Laura.

[JR]

Wow, what a sense of longing. Great use of metaphor, the comparison between keys and the flow of music to the lover's touch. "How I long for you to care for me / the way you care for your keys," I think every single one of us has had someone like this in their life. Very well said, I like the emotion that brings up.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you JR for your kind review :)

[NotUsinganymore]

Very lovly poem and nice fancy words. I enjoyed t. It flowed well.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you so much Jung Lee