They say home is where the heart is at. Your poem proves this to be true, as every heart wishes to be free. To have a captive heart is almost postmortem. Chains that bind us to this Earth tighten what really matters, our personal liberty, as you so clearly state. Good work on this short but meaningful piece.
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You explain this so nicely Bryad, thank you for your thoughtful review.
They say home is where the heart is at. Your poem proves this to be true, as every heart wishes to be free. To have a captive heart is almost postmortem. Chains that bind us to this Earth tighten what really matters, our personal liberty, as you so clearly state. Good work on this short but meaningful piece.
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5 Years Ago
You explain this so nicely Bryad, thank you for your thoughtful review.
yes! a huge step in ones life .. self acceptance and love .. without it we are stymied .. love your poem and sound wisdom .. simply stated in a natural rhythm of words .. thanks for sharing Laura!
E.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this! Laura.
we can get so far away from who we really are...but when we find our home base (ourselves) again...
the real we...yes, it's acceptance and freedom....and who cares what others think...
we are what we are.
really thoughtful piece.
j.
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Thank you as ever Jacob for your thoughtful review. It's a great feeling.
Best wishes, .. read moreThank you as ever Jacob for your thoughtful review. It's a great feeling.
Best wishes,
Laura
Knowing oneself, understanding oneself, give oneself to oneself, love oneself and accepting oneself as oneself is could be the best freedom oneself can have.
Sorry for my reputation of words. It's just intentional.
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I appreciated it, as I also contemplated my own repetition of 'herself' in my poem but decided it wa.. read moreI appreciated it, as I also contemplated my own repetition of 'herself' in my poem but decided it was necessary. Thank you for your lovely review Kay,
Laura