The Soul man

he's coming

"Taken" 

 she screams,

"taken..." 

 she screams, 

"from the soul man!"

- from the soul man ?

"Taken" she screams,

taken!" she screams,

- from the soul man?

"from the soul man!"

Running.....

running......

footsteps down the stairs,

footsteps on the stairs

tap 

tap 

tap 

tap,

faster,

faster,

footsteps....

footsteps.

open, close

open

... close

he's looking 

he's looking.....

the doors... the doors!

open

close

open 

close,

the doors, 

oh the doors...

there must be another way out of here

there must be another way out

round to the right 

climb the next flight

out through the door

look back no more

in through the back

out though the hatch

stop looking back

you're wasting time

go

go!

....go

go!!!!

he's right behind you

just on the other side 

- the soul man? 

"the soul man !"

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's almost to me like her conscience following her...her past sins catching up...as she tries to outrun the life she led before...trying to start over.
j.

[Laura Kate]

Yes I see that too, I like your interpretation Jacob, thank you

[Edie Blue Starfish]

This is chilling. I imagine he is a stealer of souls. Very good idea for a horror story I think.

[Laura Kate]

Thanks for your feedback Edie, sounds like a great summer project!