little sapling

beginner among the experienced

I'm just a little sapling among tall trees.
In a vast forest

I am small
I will grow

I'm just a little sapling among tall trees.
In a vast forest.

Surrounded by strong oaks and pines.
They give life, they give shelter.

Tall trees that bring so much beauty
When the wind blows, their branches sway, making music with their leaves

The sound is so lovely

I'm just a little sapling among tall trees
In a vast forest

Many years shall pass
Some will wither , some will remain
But I have no worries
Time will make me stronger and I will be a sapling no more

Reviews

[Heather]

I love how the poem is structured and the fact that your poem is based on one piece of personification is amazing and original. Well done its great :D

[Busiku Halwiindi]

Touching and expressive! I like how each stanza was portrying the potential.

[*Clare*]

Thanks for the review:)