sweet whispers of forever

Love binds us all . Love heals all wounds

The sand of the sea
Our bed tonight
The ocean is singing
Our song tonight

Wrapped in your arms
This is where I want to be
Our fingers intertwined
Say you'll stay my love

Sweet whispers of forever
I hold you closer
Kiss away my tears
I'll kiss away yours
Let's forget pain
Let's forget misery

Lost souls we once were
Now here we are.
Our souls recreated
Save me and I'll save you

I'll wait with you
Wait until the color fills your eyes
Stay awake to see the sun rise

The light will shine
The flames will ignite within us
Wrapped in your arms
This is where I want to be
Forever

Reviews

[ShelleyA]

A lovely write about your love for this special person in your life. Heartfelt. Well crafted free verse. Imagery and descriptives are good. Flow is good as is the line to line transition and breaks. Nice personification of the ocean: "the ocean is singing" - a vivid descriptive. Deep expression of emotion. Very good closing lines. Well penned. Write on!

[*Clare*]

Thank you shelleyA . Review is greatly appreciated :)

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome. Have a good day.

[annabellee]

such a great piece, I really enjoyed reading it a lot. Descriptive and sweet. Loved it :)

[*Clare*]

Thank you annabel lee

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)