Release Me

12 November 2011

I was trapped inside an egg

The shell was stone hard

Sealed tight

And dark beyond the spectrum of vision

I was trapped in an egg

No light came in

No nothing came out

The enraging heat exhausting

I was trapped in an egg

Lost in the yolky reverie

Living in my own fantasy

Sealed away from reality

And then you came

And you were like a hatchet

You cracked the shell, let in the light, taught me to smile

Let in peeps of blue from the sky

And the sun shined its shine

And the birds hummed their melodies

And flowers sprouted their blossoms

You became my reverie

And now you are gone

Like all joys come and go

Doesn't matter, I don't care; Because you left a mark

Evil fades, good stays- no Superman, just Lois Lane- doesn't matter; Because I ain't the same

~Lou Woo~

Reviews

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Very awesome!

[africa]

Good job. Great story. Very well written. I loved it.

[Quentin Moyer]

I loved this! Very well written! Tells a great story, great job!