Haiku:Haiku

12 November 2011

Five syllables here

Then seven syllables here

Another five here

Like a ball of yarn

Silly, playful, humorous

String-along of words

One, two, three, four, five

Seven beats fit on this line

Five, four, three, two, one

~Lou Woo~

Reviews

[A.B.Ciao]

I love this so much
This is an awesome piece Lou
I want to see more!

^see what I did there?

K.

[(☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞Emmett..]

Haha! Clever. I like it. Five, four, three, two, one.

[Viet Pham]

Very intelligent poem, great job!

[The Girl with the smile]

Great poem! Clever idea!

[Quentin Moyer]

I like it, can be related as anything, good job!

[....]

I like this, thought it was thought out very well.
Wonderful write.