The Hunted: A Short Story

The Hunted: A Short Story

A Story by D.S. Patton
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Hello. My name is Imara, and I live among the hunted. However, don't be alarmed. I have a plan to escape...

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Present Day

 

My name is Imara, and I live among the hunted. There are sixty of us who live here now--in an isolated and guarded camp hidden in Dar es Salaam--the former capital of Tanzania. The dusty, gravel-filled, makeshift camp is surrounded by high walls and protected around the clock by guards with guns. It’s supposed to be our home, and for some, it’s the only home they’ve ever known. The Tanzania government funds our camp. They go through great pains to make sure that we are comfortable since the walls that protect us have turned into a prison. Once inside, we are never allowed to leave. We are refugees in our own country.

A select few of the hunted, who thirst for a life outside these walls, wake up at the break of dawn to catch a glimpse of the outside world as the walls separate and the visitors are searched one by one and allowed to enter. Everyday we have visitors--most of which are our counselors and teachers. I don’t think most of the hunted could survive this place without them. They are the connection to the outside world that we desperately need. They teach us how to read, write, and count, but most importantly, they teach us how to love. How to love each other and how to love ourselves--which is almost impossible to do after being ostracized, ridiculed, and abandoned because of an affliction that is more like a curse: Albinism.

In a country full of color, the albinos are the colorless--devoid of pigmentation in their skin, hair, and eyes. Some say they are otherworldly--demons, sorcerers, or perhaps haunts of European colonists. I question this comparison--wondering how many of them have ever seen the aforementioned to make such a juxtaposition. Nevertheless, because of this and the myths perpetuated by witch doctors that certain body parts of the hunted transmit magical powers and bring prosperity, they are maimed, murdered, and dismembered. They are hunted like animals. A complete set of all four of their limbs, genitals, ears, tongue, and nose can fetch as much as $75,000.00 on the black market. They are living, breathing dollar signs--the personification of wealth and power in one of the poorest countries in the world. They aren’t safe anywhere--even among their families. Most of the hunted are missing limbs--arms, hands, legs, and feet because of the people they trusted the most.

I have been here ten years--arriving when I was eleven years old. At one time, I had a life beyond these walls. A life that I’m determined to get back as soon as they realize that they’ve made a mistake. As soon as they understand that I’m not like them. I sympathize with their plight, but I don’t belong here. If you’ve been paying attention up until this point, you should be curious about my use of the pronouns: them and they. The utilization of them delineates a distinction and separation from them and me. Given the preceding, you should be asking yourself one question: If she is not one of the hunted then why does she live among them? Don’t worry, I will answer your question, but first I must start from the beginning. 

© 2015 D.S. Patton


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It takes a special story to make me read from beginning to end without skimming and skipping like a well listened to record. I digested every word and wanted more.

Bravo, from beginning to end a scrumptious meal.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well, D.S. Paton, I'm impressed. Not only is your writing correct and well-polished, but the story is gripping. I'm glad you cleared up the" them" and "they", for I really was wondering.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

Hello Samuel! Your review made my day! I'm so grateful that you enjoyed it and took time out of your.. read more

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Added on August 5, 2015
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