All Together Stand As One

All Together Stand As One

A Poem by Lotus
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Written my second time in jail. One of my favorites.

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All together stand as one

Nothing but anothers son

Black and bruised

Always used

Vanglorious race

Put back in thier place

All together stand as one

We're all burnt by the sun

Venal Villains

Kill by the millions

Fascist reich

It's time for strike

Three!!!

Your out

Does it help at all to shout?

I wont quit 'til your done

All together stand as one

© 2009 Lotus


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This would have to be my favorite out of all of your poems as well. Brilliant rhythm, sweet flow, works well.




Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this one! The repetitive line works well here; it gave me sort of a 'drumbeat' feel if that makes any sense. I can see why it's one of your favorites.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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