"Love"

" Always love gives you a positive impact and positive energy"

Thank you for being with me,
Thank you for keeping me,
You don't even know how much this mean to me,
This is like a deep love between sugar and salt, like a genuine love between clouds and sky,
Every promise that you promised,
Every swear that you did,
Makes me every moment loving you more,
You are the only one who I can adore,
Without your voice,
There's no reason to live,
Without your noise,
There's no life to wish,
Can you hear my heart,
Telling you, you're in every part,
Tell me the truth, do you think this love will be forever,
Or just for the only time we're together,
I believe my heart, you'll never hurt,
Is this the heaven to me!,
When the world meant " you and me"! '

Author's Note

Please, Ignore grammar problems!
Hope you enjoy the poem🌸🌸

Reviews

[Gee]

We, all of us, seek to find a true and lasting love but with this come the fear and doubts expressed above
Well written piece Losy

[Losy Waleed]

Thanks a lot, Gee!
Actually, we are the main reason of fear and doubts we can beat it or die with it. And to find a lasting love like a miracle 😊🌸

[#33]

A friend sent this poem to me on FB. I'm so glad I didn't delete it as spam. What a beautiful poem.

[Losy Waleed]

Am so happy to hear this!
So happy to Finding someone shared my poem on fb and liked it. read moreAm so happy to hear this!
So happy to Finding someone shared my poem on fb and liked it.
Well, I am so lucky that you didn't spam it😊.
Thanks a lot for your kind review and I appreciate it🌸

[Jimmy Yetts]

An open and heartfelt yearning for true love.
Hard to ignore the underlying emotion.
Touching, L.

[Losy Waleed]

Thanks, Jimmm!🌸🌸🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈