" The thing "

" The thing "

A Story by Losy Waleed
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Have you ever feel that yourself lost! Same way, sometimes who go, cannot back "never back".

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At the first day of the summer's vacation, two groups of friends decided to do something new and crazy at the same time,regardless of their stupid thoughts but suddenly they heard a sound like " svirkls", that sound was like something felt down on the floor. They didn't pay any attention to it and continued their conversation which based on finding somewhere to spend their vacation in. One of those friends said that " Hey Guys I know where we can go", they all in one voice " Where". He said lets meet at night we'll go there mentioned Surprise guys.
At night, they all prepared their items and started to their adventure. They went to old small cave in the dark forest, they felt excited there and they entered the cave, searched for the lights and "svirkls", they laughed much. Then they explored the cave, and found a "thing" which looked like a "nothing", they threw it and one of those friends said "Com'n Com'n" they said "what", that friend said "Svirkls" joking guys don't bother. Unfortunately, This Joke not as bad as what they faced in that cave.
After that, the sound "svirkls" repeated many times, then they heard "Close ur eyes and never see what will happen, Close ur eyes and do not scream", they thought this was said by one of the friends. Actually, They all saw: " people dead, things broke by" svirkls ", storm only in the cave, ghosts came over them, and they couldn't really move, the only thing they have been done is screaming loudly, due to that" the thing that was threw by them flues into their all eyes and they listend "svirkls",and they all are gone to a very evil place contained things, things, they couldn't recognize what it was or where they were and for sorry, the cave graved in the mud in the forest where nobody will find them.

Do you think they'll escape? That we will know after..

© 2017 Losy Waleed


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Losy Waleed
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Losy Waleed
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In love with writing stories, scriptwriting, and movies. My world maybe as close as fiction. To be clear, I can give you the wise when you need it. I can give you the hope which will help you to l.. more..

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