In a maze...

It's a bit of a confusing poem, I hope you enjoy.

Like a maze, I'm lost in the words;

that the world seems to like to shout.

When there I am lost and dazzled,

wondering what all the fuss is about.

 

Does anyone else see the clouds of smoke?

From those burning red flags?

Or is everyone still more concerend over

their shoes and their bags?

 

Theres more to life than words left unsaid.

Theres more to life than the lies of being lost.

 

Wheres the respect gone for the damned?

Where's the truth gone about lifes own cost?

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

Like a maze, I'm lost in the words;

that the world seems to like to shout.

When there I am lost and dazzled,

wondering what all the fuss is about.

you have talked about a very contemporary crisis, a problem of Post-modern minds !

[BubblingMe]

Ooh this is PERFECT, just what I needed!

[Kimberley Reid]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!